This is one of the best books I have ever read. I heard so many great things about this book I just had to check it out myself. I loved it! I think that you explained it very well and thoroughly. One of the great parts of the story was how you told the readers that you were helping your friend. Why did you want to do all those things for her? I think that she should have been brave enough to do it herself. A really bad part about the story is that there are a few super chapters that are really pointless. Another question I have for you is why do you like to be around that guy instead of your best friend?
I love how your book gives all the details of what happens when teens get pregnant. When teens read your book hopefully they will understand the things that happen when you do get pregnant. So then people will think back and remember this book. I really like how you brought your aunt Sheila into the story. Then you really explain how she is always there for you and she is really fun.
Is she your favorite family member? I also felt that you described all the characters with great detail. You had a lot of great adjectives in the story for every one of the characters. For some teens this could be a life changing story. Maybe even a world changing story. If enough people read it I think it could cut down some of the teen pregnancies around the world. I love this story.
It would have to be hard to tell your parents about being pregnant. It seems like the world is going to end when you have to tell them! I love how after she comes to your house to kind of feel safe. You seem like a really good friend in the story. The way you always stay by your friend’s side when she needed you most. I also like how you deeply explain where you live. How it’s a boring desert. I think you should make a sequel about your friend stating if she kept the child or not. That would be a great sequel for the first book. If people read this book they would definitely want to read another.
I think you are a great writer. Not very many 14 year olds have the time or patience to write a story especially one as long as yours is. This story will probably inspire many other kids to start writing. If you can write a chapter book than anyone can write a short story or even better. Please try and make a sequel for this book. It would make a lot of teens and parents very happy. You are now one of my favorite authors. Thank you for taking some of your time to read my letter. I can’t wait for another book from you. Have a great life and happy holidays.
Sincerely,
Karlee tanksley

This is one of the best books I have ever read. I heard so many great things about this book I just had to check it out myself. I loved it! I think that you explained it very well and thoroughly. One of the great parts of the story was how you told the readers that you were helping your friend. Why did you want to do all those things for her? I think that she should have been brave enough to do it herself. A really bad part about the story is that there are a few super chapters that are really pointless. Another question I have for you is why do you like to be around that guy instead of your best friend?
I love how your book gives all the details of what happens when teens get pregnant. When teens read your book hopefully they will understand the things that happen when you do get pregnant. So then people will think back and remember this book. I really like how you brought your aunt Sheila into the story. Then you really explain how she is always there for you and she is really fun.
Is she your favorite family member? I also felt that you described all the characters with great detail. You had a lot of great adjectives in the story for every one of the characters. For some teens this could be a life changing story. Maybe even a world changing story. If enough people read it I think it could cut down some of the teen pregnancies around the world. I love this story.
It would have to be hard to tell your parents about being pregnant. It seems like the world is going to end when you have to tell them! I love how after she comes to your house to kind of feel safe. You seem like a really good friend in the story. The way you always stay by your friend’s side when she needed you most. I also like how you deeply explain where you live. How it’s a boring desert. I think you should make a sequel about your friend stating if she kept the child or not. That would be a great sequel for the first book. If people read this book they would definitely want to read another.
I think you are a great writer. Not very many 14 year olds have the time or patience to write a story especially one as long as yours is. This story will probably inspire many other kids to start writing. If you can write a chapter book than anyone can write a short story or even better. Please try and make a sequel for this book. It would make a lot of teens and parents very happy. You are now one of my favorite authors. Thank you for taking some of your time to read my letter. I can’t wait for another book from you. Have a great life and happy holidays.
Sincerely,
Karlee tanksley